海 外 頭 條總 編 火 鳳 凰 （海外）
海外頭條總編審 王 在 軍 （中國）
海外頭條副編審 Wendy溫迪（英國）
圖片選自百度
太陽的眷戀
文/舞韻
北國的夏季
你是那樣吝嗇
時而放出的熱將空氣渲染
讓物種多樣變色
時而又將你的溫柔輕輕地吹吻
依然嗅到你的熱
抗衡著離你遠(yuǎn)去的自轉(zhuǎn)
卻從不離你而去突有迅無
千千萬萬年的追求
永無休止的眷顧
南疆的你還是那樣熾熱
燒烤著肌膚的波
你的微轉(zhuǎn)帶動著黑子的分裂
溫澤萬物
追逐著永不離去
遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)地在熱浪中尋悟
隨著你遠(yuǎn)去的旋
悄然進(jìn)了明媚涼爽的秋霧
08/30/2025
AI :好美的詩 ???
你這首《太陽的眷戀》把太陽寫得既有溫柔又有熾烈，一方面是生命的給予者，一方面又是不可抗拒的力量。讀起來像是在看一幅四季流轉(zhuǎn)的畫卷：
? 北國里，太陽若隱若現(xiàn)，時冷時熱，像在考驗萬物的耐心。
? 南疆里，它又毫不吝嗇，把熱與光全都灑下，甚至帶點熾烈的“占有欲”。
? 黑子與旋轉(zhuǎn)的意象，很科學(xué)又很詩意，仿佛自然和宇宙的運動也融進(jìn)了人類的情感。
? 結(jié)尾“明媚涼爽的秋霧”，像是太陽遠(yuǎn)去后留下的溫柔余韻，很有層次感。
這首詩讓我感覺：太陽在你的筆下，不只是天體，更像一個帶著執(zhí)著情感的“生命伴侶”。
The Affection of the Sun
by Wuyun
In the northern summer
you are so sparing—
At times your heat paints the air,
turning colors in countless lives;
At times your breath falls soft,
yet still it carries warmth.
Resisting the drift of turning worlds,
never departing, never sudden—
A pursuit of thousands, millions of years,
an endless vigil, an eternal care.
In the southern lands you burn the same,
searing the skin with waves of fire.
Your subtle spin divides the sunspots,
yet grants its blessing to all beings.
We chase you, knowing you’ll not leave,
seeking wisdom in the shimmer of heat.
And as your arc recedes,
you slip into the gentle autumn mist.
08/30/2025
The Sun's Longing
By Wu Yun
Summer in the North
You are so stingy
Sometimes the heat you release colors the air, changing the colors of the diverse species
Sometimes you gently kiss me with your tenderness, still inhaling your warmth
Resisting your receding rotation
But never leaving you, suddenly and suddenly
A thousand years of pursuit
Endless favor
You in southern Xinjiang are still as blazing as ever, scorching the waves on my skin
Your slight rotation drives the sunspots to split, warming all things
Chasing the never-leaving
Searching for enlightenment in the distant heat
Following your receding vortex
Quietly entering the bright, cool autumn mist
作者簡介
Grace 號舞韻 。生于南疆，長于北國。美籍華人定居紐約近30 年?，F(xiàn)居美國佛州羅德岱堡水城。喜愛跳舞，癡於文字。愛好讀詩，寫詩，朗誦。喜詩海裡衝浪。
習(xí)作發(fā)表在各種詩歌平臺及紙刊，並獲多種詩歌獎。
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